Rewrite the meeting between
Equality and Liberty from her perspective.
Anthem, by Ayn Rand—Chapter 2
Anthem, by Ayn Rand—Chapter 2
Every day when we went out to
work in the fields, a brother would watch us. We did not know what to think of
this, for brothers never looked upon us. This brother kept his eyes upon us as
we worked in the field, and we pretended not to notice.
After many days of this, we came
close to the hedge where this brother was, and we turned to them. They were
striking. Taller and stronger than any other brother, with eyes like fire but
also like ice, we stood aghast amongst their beauty and did not move. But we
stared too long, and were embarrassed, so we turned and walked away from them.
The following day we met this
brother again, and today we smiled. They smiled back at us. We were overwhelmed
with joy, and we threw our body back toward the sky who had always been our
friend. We turned once more over our shoulder and gazed upon them. They were
different.
Every morning thereafter, we met
this way but did not speak but with our eyes. What would come of us if we had?
Execution certainly. But oh, we wanted to hear their voice just once. If even
anyone had seen us as we raised our hand to our forehead and moved it in
accordance with them, they would not have thought a thing of it. But can one
survive off of gestures of the hand? This mysterious brother we know nothing
of, yet we know them more than any other human being, and we feel something
towards them that we feel towards no other. We do not know though what this
feeling is. Women should not think of men, nor men of women, yet we find
ourselves always thinking of this brother and their beauty. They are not like
the others.
This day was monumental. We were
kneeling along a moat that runs through the field and all the other women were
far off. We saw them there by the hedge and rose and came toward them. As we
were entranced by them, we were startled—but still—as they said to us, “You are
beautiful, Liberty 5-3000.”
They knew our name, and they
thought us beautiful! But what could we say? We had never spoken toward man,
certainly not a man like this man, and we were afraid. “What is your name?” Oh, how stupid of us! What a thing to ask.
They had just told us we were beautiful, and all we ask is a name.
“Equality
7-2521,” they answered.
“You
are not one of our brothers, Equality 7-2521, for we do not wish you to be.” What were these words we had just uttered to
this being? Not even do we understand what we meant by them.
“No,
nor are you one of our sisters.” Yet they
understood what we meant.
“If
you see us among women, will you look upon us?”
“We
shall look upon you, Liberty 5-3000, if we see you among all the women of the
earth.”
“Are
the Street Sweepers sent to different parts of the City or do they always work
in the same places?” We were curious to
know if they would look upon us every day thereafter.
“They
always work in the same places, and no one will take this road away from us.” Joy filled our soul.
“Your
eyes,” we said, “are not like the eyes of any among men.”
They
replied, “How old are you?”
And
we felt ashamed. “Seventeen,” we whispered. We smiled sadly, for we knew what
they thought, and then we retreated.
That night we lie in our clean white
room with one hundred beds and we ponder at the ceiling of the whereabouts of
this brother, who in our thoughts is the Unconquered, for we know that nothing
can conquer them. We wish only to speak to them again—and again, and again, and
again.
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